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oh wow -- a new beginning

Sep 03 '02 (Updated Jan 11 '04)

The Bottom Line Wrote this poem the other day in what is probably a vein attempt to win girl's heart back - thanks Epinions for adding these categories.

air escapes me as I
breathe out and imagine
how pictures fall from
my eyes

tears turning into dust
and the night jumps
backward in time through
dreams and cement walls
block forward movement

but

oh how I miss the sweet tilt
of your head and that
soft subtle smile that so
easily formed whenever
we were near

and

oh how I miss the
way the light dances
and twinkles in your
eyes when you laugh
and that oh so erotic

smile

but most of all I miss

the sweet tender smell
of your skin beneath
my tender lips as we'd
caress and love
deep into the night

(c) August 31, 2002, Steven H. Lee




what the darkness doesn't know...

You like me, don't you?
Exponential Silences
aspiration lost
i want you to describe
An Original Motion Picture Soundtrack
reflections (3 poems)
Untitled No. 1, 2 & 3
Sara
the circus is coming to town
unacustomed emotional decay
memory fragments puzzles and more
eight headed poems
Last Night
warm wind
a new beginning
i just wanted to let you know
sympathetic memory
Untitled No. 13
Untilted No. 14 & 15
just let
two one two and four
fists pound the air
drunk stumble and lag
love lust music



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