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June -12th - 1992

Dec 09 '04

The Bottom Line Learn from this, once you lose them....they are gone. It takes work, work that few are willing to invest. The end result is so sad & lasting.

June - 12th - 1992

It's a pickup with a trailer
that comes to take my dreams
away.

Stuff this and that
here and there
it's all in
latch the door.

We need to go now
and with a hug it's
goodbye dear.

I walk through empty rooms
trash strewn here and there
recognized scents are fading
the silence is --
deafening.

Light fades and night closes in
emptiness --
a cell --
of nothing.

Fathers Day is near
and nothing --
I will hear.

Two it takes to make it
only one --
to dissolve it.

"Till Death Do Us Part" --
we had said --
and yet --
we parted.

"I" have died twice
this way --
the pain --
NEVER --
goes away.

Written by; - Ray Brown

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Member: RAY BROWN
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Male, 60, Retired. Hobbies;- fishing, building scale model kits, photography, camping, travel/RVing, friends, family.


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