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With Eyes that are Starving

Nov 25 '05

The Bottom Line Is there any doubt that it is only great pain that yields great art. Or, in this case, not-so-great art.

With eyes that are starving


You stare at me with eyes that are starving
beneath a stray-dog moon
wandering aimlessly in an obsidian sky
In the deafening silence of the crush
of the unseen ocean
we take small steps on the splintered back
of a wooden serpent ever winding
stopping now and again
trying to stall the morning
We stop beneath the stuttering lights
of a blank marquee
our tongues numb
Your eyes devour my face
our breath freezes between us
and I hold you close
Sea-spray stings the corners of my eyes
I bury my face in the warmth of your neck
God looks away
And we both know the sun is rising

(c) 05 November 2005

~ Mike Picardi

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